Monday, May 14, 2012

The hanted house


Madi screemed  as we drove in the gates of the hanted house. I opened the door and there was a walking skeleten and a gost with no head. Then a monster came up behind us and we screemed.

 By Olivia!!!!!!



3 comments:

grantsbraes said...

i liked the bright colours and the background

grantsbraes said...

lovely work Olivia! I like how you said then a monster came up behind us and we screemed . A wish would be, maybe to be to put more adjective in.

from Ella!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

grantsbraes said...

i love how you painted a picture n my mind of what happend.rememberto edit your work we found a mistken spelling in gost the correct spelling is ghost

from anaya and megan