THE FIRE BALL EAGLE
The fire ball eagle was at Troy. It had black eyes like rain clouds. He could make clouds go black. People would scream and run inside when they saw him. The fire ball eagle had a tail like horse and his legs like a cat. His wings were light blue like the sky.
By Sophie
4 comments:
i liked how you added some similes and adjectives and you need to work on putting more adjectives and similies
Sounds like an interesting creature. I'm not sure if I want to meet him though! You have used some great describing words Sophie.
Make sure you read your work carefully to check that it makes sense.
Mum
Excelent job Sophie i like how you used some magic on the clouds.
Thomas
I liked how you described his eyes they must look pitch black, and the back legs of a cat, but one thing, what does Troy look like? or Is that something we have to find out??
Michael. have fun editing your blog. :P
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