Chimera Description.
The Chimera was a mean monster who had the breath of fire. People were afraid of the Chimera because his eyes were like fireballs and his tail had massive spikes at the end of it which he would use to kill anyone who came near him.
By Miss Collins
3 comments:
Well done Miss Collins. I like the way you used adjectives to describe the Chimera's tail. Next time you should try including a similie in your description.
By Room 3
Great work I liked how you described your monsters body Please use some simleies next time
From Sophie
Well done Miss Collins.It was awesome how you used the word massive for the spikes on the tail so we could easily picture how big the spikes were and I like how you used the word fireballs for the eyes . Next time it would be cool if you described how the fireball looked e.g. bright, blue,orange and red so we could picture even more how the eyes looked.
Abe
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