Ahhh! Run, run, run for your life. Please don't hit me .Where can I climb? Where can I climb? Oh that looks like a good spot uh oh! They are catching up with me. Less talking more running (and climbing).
i liked how you said less talking and you need more similes and describ how you felt and also tell what you are doing and why what when how who use those 5 thing and i rat your 5/5
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nice job Narayan I like the way you really thought that it was bad
Next time you could try and add more adjectives instead of your thoughts
Thomas
i liked how you said less talking
and you need more similes and describ how you felt and also tell what you are doing and
why
what
when
how
who
use those 5 thing and i rat your 5/5
from shelby
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