The war game


3,2,1, as the round started. bang,bang. I aimed my golden scope at a human enemy and then I shot... 
yes I had got him. Or had I. He dropped his gun and fell to the hard,rock,ground...!!!

By Jarrod
             

"Come on Ellie" let's go on the twisty tube" I said. We sprinted up the cold, grey ramp to the fast colorful tube. I wanted to do the train so I said "Ellie you go in the front". So Ellie did and when we got down to the bottom Ellie and I saw Michael, Lewis and Harry.Then we raced up to the top and they won, so they hid so we went down first. The HYDRO SLIDE was fun, colorful, awesome and amazing. !!!!!!


BY MIKAYLA !!!

"Come on Mikayla!" I yelled as I ran up the grey ramp. When we reached the top Mikayla and I made a train. Mikayla was in front and I was at the back. Cold rushing water hit my cold legs as I started to get really wet. I started to go faster and the colourful walls turned blurry. "Splash!" I hit the bottom of the hydro slide. "Lets go again." Said Mikayla.

By Ellie!!!

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