Monday, May 7, 2012
bull rush runner
Splash! as i ran though the water. As i was running i could taste the water coming right at me.Ruff Ruff as i could hear the bulls about 2 a metre away from me my heart was pounding really fast. I could not stop because they would butt me and it would hurt.Then it was over
By Shelby Restieaux
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Great work Try and ad some similes next time.
From Sophie
Great Work next time ad some smilies
From Sophie
Great Work next time ad some smilies
From Sophie
good work
*i like how you said splash as I walked through the water.
from matthew
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