The really nasty eagle-dragon blows acid out of his mouth and also his nose to. His eyes are nasty red and he has got these really, really sharp claws. Everyone is scared of him because he has eaten six hundred human people! His wings are so big they nearly cover the United States and everyone keeps a billion miles away from the nasty eagle-dragon. His fire can reach 250 miles per hour. He is so tall that it seems that the worlds tallest man is tiny.
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Hello its Ryan and William from room 1 we are posting a comment on this page about your writing. We like how you used a lot of strong verbs and adjectives and also we think that next time maybe try not use the word "got" so much. See if you can use a stronger verb.
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