Jet boating
Whoosh a cloud of water splashed us.
The boat was moving so fast the rocks looked like chocolate.
The water was so frothy it looked like a bubble bath.
When the ride stoped I couldn't believe eyes.
My heart was beating so fast I couldn't count them. That was amazing.
3 comments:
Good similes But next time you could use some adjectives
Dear Georgia
I liked how your verbs were so strong. Good similes too. Next time you should work on some adjectives.
by sophie
i liked how you said Whoosh a cloud of water splashed us. and add more similes like say about 4
Question who are these post from??
from shelby
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