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Monday, May 7, 2012

Bungy jumping

3, 2, 1 Go! I jumped off the platform and rushed towards the river all of my blood came rushing towards my head. Suddenly I felt a big yang as the pully slowly pulled me to the top. Now that was fun.

By Thomas

3 comments:

grantsbraes said...: Nice discriptive words Thomas But next time you could some more adjectives.

by Narayan; May 7, 2012 at 11:59 AM
grantsbraes said...: i liked how you said the blood came rushing down my face and you need to work on making more intresting; May 7, 2012 at 11:59 AM
grantsbraes said...: perfect work thomas; May 7, 2012 at 12:21 PM